KIRNY TONG

29TH MAY 2015

Yesterday I received my result of first assigment, it is terrible.

I had confidence to my writing, despit it is not prefect.

When looking on the comments wrote by my teacher,

I thought she did not understand my meaning well.

Then, I gave to other student take a look for my writing.

She commented me to write clearly and be a simple way.

Now I need take the time to make a improvement on my wiritng.

It is time to admit my faults and the mistakes I made.

I should cleanmy mind and learn the basic writing.

Learning the basic structure to write and then make it simple.

Hoping my passage is easy to read.